The shine peace morning
On the day pop up through the tuneful voice
The tremendous point of straight link
The black creatures Show the big indolent size
But, once again it hugs my beauty slumber
Occasionally, jerking out of my unclear mediation
Trying to step the toe into the floor
Then opening the gate with slow motion
Finishing those, allowing my mind walks and looks for the truth
Working hard against the fear
But then the chilly sensation softly sweep bedbug
Finally, crying while hearing noble voice through ear
I place on you God
In the beautiful noble morning you have created.
Ramadhani_UMM




8 komentar:
gambrnya aneh...:D
not suitable with the meaning inside of the poem...:D :D
terus yang cocok seperti apa ya,,,?
:D
stanza_nya dipisah nah....as I send. itu klihatan sunset juga gmbrnya :'( bukn morning lg dumz....:D :D
hihi,,,, siap dan,,
akan saya koreksi,,,,,:D
temen yang satu ini emang emang jempolan
thanks :) it's looked better
OMj,,,,,,,halllloooooo,,,,,,,, bagus juga,,,,hehehee
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